tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post6323165999018704384..comments2023-03-21T08:04:28.367-07:00Comments on 007inYeshiva: Novel beginning...very very very very rough draft.007inYeshivahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07248953145416920655noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-52246418647201062012-02-08T08:57:56.304-08:002012-02-08T08:57:56.304-08:00“Any why not?” He demanded “ The magen avrohom bel...“Any why not?” He demanded “ The magen avrohom believed it! And the Gr”a! Are you trying to say your smarter than the Gr”a?” <br /><br />--Possibly not, rabbi, but I should say I'm far better informed on some topics.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15752938979399977997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-41583380665697916652012-02-04T07:58:13.283-08:002012-02-04T07:58:13.283-08:00This was fun to read. Keep goingThis was fun to read. Keep goingGeoffrey Charleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01688281186281150602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-79919635037614256322012-02-03T06:25:14.064-08:002012-02-03T06:25:14.064-08:00A friendly yiddish term from an older man to a you...A friendly yiddish term from an older man to a younger one. No harm or insult meant. Glad you have the coursework going. Do lots of reading to get writing styles down pat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-63602605742805072562012-02-02T19:16:05.560-08:002012-02-02T19:16:05.560-08:00Oh one more thing...WTF is a boychick exactly...is...Oh one more thing...WTF is a boychick exactly...is that like a girl with a penis?007inYeshivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07248953145416920655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-24996284170463543702012-02-02T19:15:23.609-08:002012-02-02T19:15:23.609-08:00For the record...I've taken comp 1+2 and intro...For the record...I've taken comp 1+2 and intro creative writing and have gotten A+'s in all 3. I've got the writing course thing covered007inYeshivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07248953145416920655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6069708576566877277.post-83826522133275836112012-02-02T18:03:58.295-08:002012-02-02T18:03:58.295-08:00Nice first try, boychick. Now go to college, take...Nice first try, boychick. Now go to college, take writing courses, distance yourself from the yeshiva and try again in about a year or so. You need education and a more worldly experience to write about and you need to do lots of reading to get a better idea of how to get your story across.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com